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The Life in Your Soul by *jahg:iconjahg:





Visit the life in your soul.
Manage the worm threading into your mind.
Disturb the flow of danger.
Overturn the vehicle Emotion.

Lever up the cover over privacy,
and clamour for recognition.
Infiltrate the legacy
that deliberation bequeaths.
Imagine the promise hidden in anger,
and the virginity of that satisfaction.
Harmonise the function of your heart,
and that of Reason.

Encourage the Universe to expand in you,
to take the fruit from your lips,
and function as a friend.
Throw the caution of words
upon the flames licking your heels,
and stigmatise your furtive pleasures.
Clot the feeling,
throw that morsel back,
and stopper imagination for Truth.
Let the danger of imminent closeness
sharpen the splinter of Humanity inside,
and allow the lover inside out.
©2004-2009 *jahg
:iconjahg:

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This piece is part of the series I have been working on recently about the mind and thought.

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:iconnashua:
So tranquil and hopeful..powerful message, has an uplifting quality to it..well done!!
:iconkrazyjellybean:
Wow.

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Pleasingly deranged.
:iconrushy:
Deep dude, very deep.
:iconjahg:
Uplifting was exactly what was needed here, I believe. Too often people shun the thoughts that make then stand out as individuals. I don't like to see that, because I believe in the uniqueness of the individual as a powerful force for good in the world.
:iconjahg:
Thank you, I think. :)
:iconjahg:
I try, man; I try.
:iconrushy:
And you achieve!
:iconnashua:
except when that person is george w bush :P hehe I do agree with u however =)
:iconkrazyjellybean:
It's amazing. :D

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Pleasingly deranged.

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