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The Cruellest Punishment
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Literature Text
Artist
take this dirty brush
and lock it away from me:
do not give it back.
Poet
stop the shaft of light,
let inspiration darken;
my pen will silence.
Lover
lava-lamp penis
cut clean at the bloody root:
seal closed the heart valve.
take this dirty brush
and lock it away from me:
do not give it back.
Poet
stop the shaft of light,
let inspiration darken;
my pen will silence.
Lover
lava-lamp penis
cut clean at the bloody root:
seal closed the heart valve.
There are some things that would make me wish to stop breathing.
Note: This is a resubmitted piece, so if you've commented on it previously you needn't feel forced to comment again.
Note: This is a resubmitted piece, so if you've commented on it previously you needn't feel forced to comment again.
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I hate to do this on such an image creating poem, but I wondered, that moniter/graphics tablet...is it a moniter/graphics tablet and where can I get one? hehe, there now the pointless comment is out the way, I'll try and say something worthwhile 
The 3rd stanza is my favourite as its very well written however, by your words are you suggesting that the greatest punishment for a lover is abstinence? There is more to a lover than just sex surely.
Would of been interesting to see what you would of put for 'musician' but then that would of ruined the whole "3 is a magic number" thing that seems inbuilt in our minds..
The 3rd stanza is my favourite as its very well written however, by your words are you suggesting that the greatest punishment for a lover is abstinence? There is more to a lover than just sex surely.
Would of been interesting to see what you would of put for 'musician' but then that would of ruined the whole "3 is a magic number" thing that seems inbuilt in our minds..