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Disturbed by a smack to the belly,
my bitter rain from the cloud unburdened
stains the bedroom carpet.
Rushed to clear the wasted future
breathing no more sensitively than a tree
my husband breaks the band of marriage -
leaves the deranged existence.
He will not consider mortal pain,
my desire to please the eager mother inside:
my body curls to join the life on the floor.
Of carved paper, and caved stomach,
the pretty baby no longer intact,
hot water called for and senseless oblivion -
drifts beyond the shaded soul of pencil grey.
my bitter rain from the cloud unburdened
stains the bedroom carpet.
Rushed to clear the wasted future
breathing no more sensitively than a tree
my husband breaks the band of marriage -
leaves the deranged existence.
He will not consider mortal pain,
my desire to please the eager mother inside:
my body curls to join the life on the floor.
Of carved paper, and caved stomach,
the pretty baby no longer intact,
hot water called for and senseless oblivion -
drifts beyond the shaded soul of pencil grey.
This piece was inspired by a line from Sylvia Plath's poem April 18:
a future was lost yesterday
It was remarkably difficult to write as the subject matter brought complex and unexpected thoughts to mind which I had not experienced before.
a future was lost yesterday
It was remarkably difficult to write as the subject matter brought complex and unexpected thoughts to mind which I had not experienced before.
© 2004 - 2024 jahg
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Oooh, how horrible. That's brilliant. Plath would be proud.